A Girl Can Dream is published this week in Yours Magazine (edition 361) in the UK.
The story, originally titled A Dress Made for Dancing was inspired by a real person I met through my work. Cathy, a wheelchair user also had dysarthria, a speech impairment, as does my story's Cathy. She also had an admirer called Alan but the rest is imaginary. One memory of the real Cathy, which isn't in my story, is how her speech would improve after a vodka and orange or two when we went for a jaunt to the pub. Sadly, it didn't prove to be an efficacious universal therapy tool for speech and language therapists.
Both Cathy and Alan died many years ago but I deliberately used their names in their memory. I hope they would both approve of the story.
Having said that, there have been a number of edits to my original story. One or two are fine, but many I hate. I wasn't surprised to see it changed from my first tense to past tense but the number of clichés, including its new title, that are now dotted throughout are horrible. The final sentence too, has been changed into another cliché! My image of Cathy in her beautiful blue dress was a lot more glamorous than the illustration. I wanted my story to show a wheelchair user looking absolutely fabulous, and I think the blue cardigan (which was originally a little shrug) is more like the warm winter cardigan I've been wearing during lockdown than anything Cathy would have chosen!
4 comments:
Well done Lindsay, you are such a natural storyteller. It's wonderful to see you doing so well.
Well done Linds, brilliant story. Your character reminds me of a past patient of mine. I'm so proud of you. Keep up the amazing work.
Thank you for your lovely comments.
It's surprising how often we write stories which are connected in some way to another we've written, although we may not realise until afterwards. It makes sense though – if we have a good idea or image in our head, why not get more than one story from it?
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